Post by rosie marie ∞ on Jan 3, 2012 9:20:18 GMT -5
OOC: Well I mean I was like come on Kayla the minimum in posts is 5 sentences. And she was like "What do you think I am? Retarded? I didn't know. And I changed it. She did NOT need to call ME out like that! [besides. Its still not 5 sentences.]
Post by Claire Master on Jan 3, 2012 10:28:22 GMT -5
OOC: Kayla, Rosie was simply telling you to white, 5 GOOD sentences. If the admin were here, this thread would be deleted or locked. Please, go back and white 5 GOOD sentences. Not like, "She seemed very nice." That needs to have a comma instead of a period. Plus, People if you haven't noticed, Kayla isn't the nicest person here, Just saying anyway.
I started to calm down as my friends crowned around me. The girl that looked so much like me walked over, her faces clouding with concern. Carmela. I jerked my head up to the sweet voice. It came from my sister. She stepped forward and held out her hand, like she wanted to hold mine. I placed my slightly shaky hand in her soft one. She smiled, her dark eyes warm. I'm California. In my head, I tried to put the names together. Carmela and California. Cali and Carmel. Uh. This could actually work.