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Post by Sierra ღ Lawsonღ on Jul 30, 2012 19:07:13 GMT -5
Heyo people from Canterwood! I need some seriously help... Yeah, so, I'm writing a song. I have the music for the verses and chorus, but I still need a second verse, a bridge, and music for the bridge. So what I'm asking you is; IF YOU HAVE IDEAS FOR LYRICS, PLEASE TELL ME! I'm desperate. I played it for my parents like 10 minutes ago, and my dad screamed "WE'RE GONNA BE RICH!" while my mom started crying..... So now I feel desperate to finish. It's called "Faithfully" this is what I have so far:
{Verse 1} Sometimes we don't know where we are Sometimes we don't know where to go Sometimes we take the roads less traveled Sometimes we make no sense at all Sometimes we look across the water And wonder how we are here now Sometimes I wonder if all the trouble Made everything worth while
{Chorus} I look to you When the stars begin to fade I turn to you Even in my darkest days I run away From the ones who say we can't be I know that we'll Carry on faithfully
It may look kinda long but when I sing it, but it's not. What do you think of the lyrics? Good? Bad? Meh? Got any ideas? If you took the time to read this, then thank you! ~~Sierra
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Post by Bella Marshall on Jul 30, 2012 21:54:03 GMT -5
Its really good! Do u have any other verses written?
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Post by Sierra ღ Lawsonღ on Jul 31, 2012 1:29:59 GMT -5
Like I said up there, I need lots of help cause all I have is the first verse and chorus.
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Post by Heather♥ Demian on Aug 1, 2012 13:17:01 GMT -5
I love it. I'll think of some lyrics for you if I can
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Post by lisleolover on Aug 1, 2012 13:51:51 GMT -5
That is good but I'm no good with lyrics
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Post by Bella Marshall on Aug 1, 2012 17:11:03 GMT -5
srry i just read the song but i can try and help if i can
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Post by Carmela Vigil on Aug 2, 2012 15:44:58 GMT -5
Oh my god Sierra thats amazing!! I'll try to think of some stuff also. Maybe like something like the path hard, but I know that you'll be there, or something like that,. Sorry I really suck at these kind things
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